All of my services have been designed to help get your work where it needs to be: tight, entertaining and error-free.
Each one has been developed and honed to ensure they give you, the writer, real value. You can rest assured that your script will be read in full (aside from the new First Five service of course!) and will have my complete, undivided focus.
However, if you feel you require something a little more bespoke then I am happy to tailor a service to meet your needs. Alternatively, do check out my range of additional services listed at the bottom of this page.
If you're unsure what your script requires, I'm more than happy to give the script in question a quick look to ascertain what service would best benefit you.
TO ORDER: Click on the "Order Now" button. It will take you to my Contact page. Send me a message and I will calculate the total cost in your currency. All payments are via Paypal.
This brand-new service focuses on your script's most important pages: the first five. No reader is duty-bound to love your story, so it's up to you to engage them and engage them early. And overworked execs don't have time to persevere with your story to see if it picks up later on; they need to know the quality of the script and its writer straightaway.
Using my all-new ST★RCARD system, I rate 10 key aspects pertinent to the opening of your story and script and provide brief notes on each to help you ensure your first five pages are working hard for your story. Click on the above link to see a sample of this new service.
If you feel you'd benefit from this focused feedback, then contact me with your logline and let's make a start on your start.
Introductory Price: £UKP 25.00*
the ONE SHEET service
This is my one page once-over. A quick and concise look at your TV script or screenplay that features my unique Scorecard system covering ten essential story and script elements with brief notes on each.
Click on the above pdf link to see what the One Sheet and the all-new Scorecard system looks like. This service is ideal for writers who would like a quick review of their work without the cost that more in-depth analysis brings.
£UKP 50.00* (for TV & feature scripts up to 120 pages only)
the SNAP READ service
This is my basic critique. It's for those writers who require only some brief feedback on how their screenplay fares.
It's ideal both for writers seeking an affordable evaluation on an early draft and those preparing to submit a well-revised script to an agent, production company or script competition and want one final check. Purely a general overview of the work, a typical Snap Read report covers premise, character development, structure, dialogue, action, formatting and grammar in about 5 pages.
£UKP 80.00* (for TV & feature scripts up to 120 pages only)
the ANNOTATION service
To those who've worked with me before, this is also known as my A Game and involves a thorough annotation of your script in PDF format, highlighting typos, grammatical and formatting concerns along with any story and character-based comments that I feel need to be made.
This service focuses primarily on the cosmetic concerns - layout and language - so if you are a writer who feels you need help with the formatting side of screenwriting or struggle with spelling and grammar, then this is likely to be a beneficial choice. It's also ideal for writers who like a more visual approach to analysis.
This full annotation guarantees the client that his or her work has been read in its entirety and hasn't been given the "five–and–dime" treatment. This is the dismal practice whereby many Hollywood script readers & consultants – bombarded with so many screenplays – read only the first five and last ten pages before making a judgement. You can be sure with my Sticky Note annotations that this does not happen.
£UKP 160.00* (for TV & feature scripts up to 120 pages only)
the ANALYSIS service
This is a uniquely thorough feedback service. Rather than merely providing Hollywood-style coverage – a report designed more for the executive than the writer – I don't pad out the report with a storyline breakdown but get right to the salient points, the issues, focusing on the perceived areas of concern.
Each report breaks down formatting, dialogue and description followed by an Areas of Concern section where I go into detail about issues specific to your draft. These may be character development complications, story structure problems, poor pacing, troubles with tone and theme, clarity concerns - there are a myriad potential pitfalls - but you can rest assured that whatever is found, you'll receive a comprehensive examination. On average, this deep analysis runs to between 25-35 pages
£UKP 180.00* (for all TV & feature scripts up to 120 pages only)
the A&A service
A&A stands for Annotation & Analysis and is simply the two above services combined. That's a full, detail-rich annotation of your screenplay complete with Sticky Notes together with a uniquely thorough feedback report – the best of both worlds.
This ultimate stress test of your screenplay costs £UKP 300.00* for all TV and feature scripts up to 120 pages
* Please note: these prices do not include any potential add-on fees charged by Paypal. But worry not, I will calculate these for you, if applicable.
Script over 120 pages?
Be aware this may severely hamper your chances of success. If an agent or production exec finds FADE OUT on page 121 or above, it will be a clear black mark against you. Most feature scripts these days fall between the 90-110 page count. That said, if you still wish for me to read your 120+ page script, please add an additional charge of £UKP 2.50 per additional page.
Chosen a service? Great! Just get in touch with me to confirm via the CONTACT page and we'll sort out payment and schedule and get your script where it needs to be.
the FORMAT EDIT service
a complete formatting clean - let's get your spec script looking professional with this Final Draft make-over.
the ANGLICISATION service
ideal for non-English writers wishing to get their dialogue and action sounding authentic.
the SYNOPSIS review
written a synopsis and need a professional opinion? let me at it!
the LOG-LINE review
log-lines are essential for the writing and marketing of your screenplay. I can help you develop yours.
the PROOFREADING EDIT service
spelling & grammar not your strong suit? I'll catch all those typos and syntax snafus with this complete proofing clean.
SKYPE text chat
want to discuss your project or a particular screenwriting query in a real-time conversation? Not a problem. Just contact me with your Skype address and I'll add you.
REWRITES and POLISHES
for those writers who would prefer to hire a professional to develop their project rather than do it themselves.
If you want a helping hand as you make your journey from first to finished draft, then this is the service for you.
I don't just handle tales for the big & small screens; I also read manuscripts for novels, novellas and short stories. If you need an eagle-eyed editor, then I am your man.
Let's not forget I'm also a writer. If you're a producer seeking an experienced scribe to write a first draft, adapt a client's novel or bring something fresh to an existing screenplay, then please do contact me at your convenience.
In addition to the fixed-rate services above, I have a host of other services available. For more information on these, please get in touch